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    • Aboleths
    • Phantom Sea Guardian
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    • 1690-01: January, 1690
    • 1690-02: February, 1690
    • 1690-03: March, 1690
    • 1690-04: April, 1690 WAR ON FOUR FRONTS!
  • Historical Events Fictional or alternate timeline events
    • 1680: Lesser Antilles Hurricane Disaster leads to an unusual truce
    • 1683: The Raid on Veracruz Corlis and Scarlet's First Battle
    • 1685: Battle off Havana Naval battle between Spanish and privateer fleets
    • 1686: The Port-au-Prince Negotiations aka "The Red Sash Incident"
    • 1687-1689: The Williamite War An alternate timeline
    • 1687: Ambush at Isla de Pinos Decisive Spanish victory Against French privateers
    • 1690-Present: The Jacobite Uprising A proxy war by France in Ireland
  • Session Notes
    • #001 The Phantom Sea Session #001 (25.08.03)
    • #002 The Phantom Sea, pt 2 Session #002 (25.08.17)
    • #003 Circe's Island Session #003 (25.08.31)
    • #004 Circe's Island, pt 2 Session #004 (25.09.14)
    • #005 The Labyrinth Session #005 (25.09.28)
    • #006 The Labyrinth, pt 2 Session #006 (25.10.12)
  • Ships A catalogue of noteworthy vessels
    • Spanish Navy
      • Armada de Barlovento Caribbean Defense Force
        • Galga del Sol Light Frigate, 26-gun
        • Nuestra Señora de la Luz Light Vessel, 14-guns (1680)
        • San Felipe Frigate, 30-gun
        • San Ignacio Galleon, 60-gun
        • Santa Teresa Frigate, 40-guns
      • Armada del Mar Océano
    • Unaffiliated Vessels Privateers, Freelancers, etc.
      • Caribbean Corsairs
        • Night Wind Schooner, 6-gun
        • Étoile du Nord Light Frigate, 28-guns (1685)
      • Mediterranean Corsairs
        • Graveyard Rose Brigantine, 20-24 guns
  • Writing RP, short stories, and other fiction
    • 000 Aftermath of the Escape Attempt - 17 years old Alethea
    • 000 Alethea Gets Burned - 13 years old
    • 000 Alethea Meets Santiago - 11 Years Old
    • 000 Alethea's Capture
    • 000 Alethea's First Naval Battle and Training
    • 000 Ceiran and Alethea First Meet
    • 000 Gestra and Alethea Talk Religion
    • 000 Sabine and Scarlette Meet
    • 000 The Escape Attempt - 17 years old Alethea
    • 000 The Fateful Deal - Scarlette and Percy
    • 001 Phantom Sea Downtime Alethea, Gestra, Scarlette
    • 001 Scarlette and Corlis on the Phantom Sea
    • 001 Scarlette and Sabine Down Time
    • 002 A Quiet Moment Alethea, Corlissandro
    • 002 After Battle Talks Alethea, Gestra
    • 002 Gestra and Corlis After the Aboleth Battle
    • 002 The First Words Corlissandro, David
    • 003 That Which Keeps Us Going Corlissandro, Scarlette
    • 004 A Brief Respite Chester, Corlissandro
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000 Alethea's First Naval Battle and Training

Sometime in 1674

Alethea’s knees shook as she stepped onto the quarterdeck, her bare feet skimming the damp, salt-stained planks. The air was thick with tension, ropes groaned, sailors barked in urgent tones, and the rhythmic pounding of enemy cannons echoed faintly in the distance. The Graveyard Rose was being hunted, and for the first time since Enzo had marked her, she was expected to wield her power for more than containment. For survival.

She had no staff, no charms, no sigils etched into stone. She carried nothing but the Archivist’s relentless teachings and a storm inside her veins. You are a conduit, he had told her, his silver eyes unreadable. Not the master of the storm—its voice. Speak carefully.

Terror churned in her chest. If she failed, she wouldn’t just be punished, she’d be blamed for the defeat. Every soul aboard would be shattered against the waves, and Enzo would cast her aside like dull silver.

The naval frigate loomed behind them, its sails full, its hull gleaming with fresh paint and imperial arrogance.

Alethea closed her eyes. One breath… Two breaths…

The wind answered.

It was quiet at first, just a whisper at her fingertips, a recognition. Her arms spread as if in prayer, and her breath carried old Cretan words downwind, syllables shaped by desperation and sharpened by instinct. The hum began low and steady in her bones, building until her skin tingled and the air stilled in anticipation.

Then it came, a surge of pressure behind her, an unnatural gust that snapped the sails taut and flung the Graveyard Rose forward with impossible speed. The hull trembled like a beast jolted into flight. Sailors braced against the sudden momentum, ropes whipped across the deck like serpents, and water exploded in foamy trails beneath them.

But Alethea wasn’t finished.

She turned toward the pursuing vessel, eyes wide with focus and barely contained panic. Her voice cracked as she spoke a single, fractured word. The storm heard it. Wind barreled through the space between ships in a jagged spiral, slamming into the frigate’s port side with such force that its mainmast cracked audibly. Timbers groaned. Canvas tore. The ship bucked in protest, veering sharply off-course, struggling to recover its balance.

The Graveyard Rose escaped, slicing through the open sea like a knife in wet silk.
Alethea sank to her knees, chest heaving, tears mingling with the sweat on her cheeks. She was exhausted, electrified, trembling beneath the weight of what she had done.

On the main deck, Enzo stood motionless at the helm, eyes locked on the child who had just reshaped her own future and, by extension, his own. His jaw flexed once, a ghost of emotion flickering behind glassy control. He walked slowly to her side, his boots steady against the pitching deck. Alethea flinched instinctively, expecting reprimand, a demand, perhaps another lash.

Instead, he rested one hand on her shoulder. It wasn’t gentle. It was grounding. Possessive.

No praise. No warmth. Just silent acknowledgment: she had become indispensable. He would never let her go.

Enzo watched her from the quarterdeck’s rail, eyes narrowed like twin storms as the Graveyard Rose cut through the remnants of its pursuers. The sea roared in approval, thunderous and unforgiving, as the shattered frigate slipped beneath the waves.

He did not mourn the lives lost. To him, they were consequences for the sake of survival. They had made the mistake to pursue Enzo Salvadore and had paid the price for their arrogance.

But in Alethea’s silence, he saw not relief, but fracture. Her small shaking frame now carried the weight of aftermath.

Alethea remained curled on the deck of the ship, haunted. She had felt it, the crack of the mast, the cries of the drowning, the sickening jolt of power released without mercy. She hadn’t meant to kill, hadn’t even known she could. Her magic had swelled beyond intent, beyond control. Alethea was raised in reverence for life, and now, life had spilled from her fingers like smoke from a flame.

She saw their eyes in every shadow, their hands reaching for salvation. Her dreams would would show sailors gasping beneath phantom waters, mouths stretched in blame. Her body had stopped trembling, but her mind hadn’t. Not truly. She feared herself. That was the worst part.

Enzo would leave Alethea to eventually pick herself up and go to her cabin, not offering her any comfort or care.

He would later summon the Archivist that night to the lower deck, past rows of ancient maps and scrolls inked with forgotten dialects, into the quiet chamber where different experiments were carried out. The orders were clear: no rest. She would train until exhaustion gave way to instinct. Runes, philosophy, applied theory, everything that could mold her into the weapon that Enzo required.

The next day, the Archivist found her studying long before dawn, knees drawn to her chest, a tome open but unread. He said nothing of comfort, only slid a new set of parchment across the wood, intricate wind diagrams and energy isolations marked with chilling precision. “Mastery demands detachment,” he said. “Feel nothing. You cannot depend on emotions to bring your power forward.”

But Alethea felt too much. Each lesson scraped raw her conscience. She practiced with diligence, as Enzo watched her progress like a hawk, but she gripped every success with despair. Wind responded to her whisper, and she hated it. She wanted silence. She wanted peace. But peace would never come from within unless she made peace with what she had done.

Enzo’s vision was singular: a weapon only he could control.

Alethea stood on the practice deck before dawn, the sky stretched like damp parchment above the ocean’s breath. The ship swayed gently under her feet, but her world felt anything but steady. At the far end of the deck, a row of shackled slaves knelt, wooden targets looming behind their backs like gallows stripped of subtlety. They had been dragged from the lower holds, chosen not for strength or defiance, but for how expendable they were.

The Archivist appeared from the mist like a breath of old stone, quiet, measured, heartless. He offered her the braided leather strap he called a focus, the conduit through which her lightning would be refined. He never said her name. “Stormborn,” he intoned, voice as clipped as the salt-bitten air.** “The day’s lesson is targeting. Channel, strike, repeat.”** Beside him, Enzo leaned against the quarterdeck railing, arms folded, whip coiled like a serpent at his belt.

She raised her hand slowly, the strap twitching with static. Her heart beat in syncopated rhythm: fear, refusal, dread. The first bolt she loosed split on the rim of a wooden ring, causing the slave behind it to flinch so hard his forehead slammed into the support beam, blood blooming instantly across weathered skin.

“Insufficient,” the Archivist said, tone flat as rust. **“Control. Aim.” **

He did not acknowledge the blood. Did not flinch at the whimper that followed. He turned to her with cool detachment, sliding the strap into her palm again. “Again, Vessel.”

The title turned her stomach. Not a girl. Not a student. Not even a weapon. A receptacle.
She tried again, splitting her power into a finer thread, but the charge faltered, veering wide and skittering across the deck with more spark than substance. She had struck nothing but doubt. The silent shake of the Archivist’s head that followed was worse than reprimand.

The whip cut through the air and found her back with a crack that echoed in Alethea’s chest. Fire bloomed where the leather struck, and she fell forward. Salt stung her eyes, not just from tears, but from the wound that split her skin. Every lash felt deliriously new, as if her body refused to forget a pain it endured only yesterday.

Enzo stood over the girl, his arms folded, boots planted apart in a posture that offered no softness. He studied her like a blacksmith studies a blade mid-forging, testing not just for strength, but for purity of purpose. There was no anger in him, only expectation. Behind him, the Archivist stood still, his expression unreadable, like the marble faces of the temple statues she used to pray beneath. No sympathy. No regret. Only the sharp calculation of a man who valued outcome over suffering.

Alethea dared to lift her eyes, pleading for something, leniency, humanity, a flicker of compassion. But all she received was the rasp of the Archivist’s voice, each word a chisel against her identity. “Rise, girl.”

That name, that dismissal of self, stung worse than the lash. The Archivist had never once called her Alethea. To him, she was a conduit, a cipher for power, a thing carved from wind and lightning. Vessel. Stormborn. Girl. Anything but her name. And every lesson he taught reminded her she was a means to an end, an arcane inheritance weaponized for a tyrant’s ambition.

She pushed herself upright, trembling with the effort, bones aching like splintered wood beneath a gale. Her breath came in heaves, ragged and punctuated by the iron tang of blood in her mouth. And yet, in that fragile space between agony and refusal, something inside her flickered to life, not anger, but a memory. A kind of primal remembrance of the temple’s peace, of cloisters full of whispers and candlelight where she once believed magic could heal.

Lore

Graveyard Rose Brigantine, 20-24 guns

Characters

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Alethea Argyros Greek Storm Sorceress
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Archivist Enigmatic Persian Sorcerer
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Enzo Salvadore Captain of the Graveyard Rose